October Girl

Oh!!!! I love it already. Great job Ross! The perfect start at a chapter you left the reader hanging on the edge great job. I'm not going to point out ...

(Jess) "But I can't stay." I whispered, "I'ts too dangerous I won't risk you... you and Maria are everything to me.. closest thing to me... I've gotta go." I whispered, ...

*oh ok yeah sure*

*ya it's the whole old clan from storybook #1 Maria, Jared, Jessica, Tobi and Amber*

(Jess) I pulled on some tight blue jeans and a see through white tank top. I walked out of the room, I was having a hard time breathing, Tobi must ...

(Jess) "Yeah, I know. Then, nevermind what I was just about to say... because then, you'd be more pissed at me." I said that before I could think about it. ...

(Jess) As I ran my way home as a were-cat it would take at least ten minutes in cat form but 45 minutes in human form. I could still talk ...

(Jess) "So what now? Were do we go? Who are we?" I asked, I was going insane. "What do you mean by that?" Tobi asked. I mentally kicked myself in ...

(Jess) I didn't know it but I accidently blocked our link. "Sorry, sorry I'm still here." I said in my head. "Where are you?"Tobi asked. "I'm sorry Tobi, I can't ...

(Jess) I could feel Tobi screaming through my block for me to answer him, finally he was giving me a headache and I yelled at him trying my hardest to ...

(Jess) *so bored so I think I'll post once again!* I watched the fire burn as I thought about the reason I'd left.... Jared... his death had felt like I ...

(Jess) I didn't know how to keep Tobi from my mind for God sake we were linked!!! Did I forget to mention that we were linked. Linking meant we had ...

*Thanks Maki for keeping my charater in!!! I owe you big time!!!!!* Name:Jessica Kirez Age:15 Sign: Part Vampire part were-cat Danger: silver will kill her without food will kill her ...

Hi! Anyways *clears throat* I loved the poem but hated how it kept repeating-no offence but it kind of got annoying. The reader will understand you're sitting in a sea ...

Hi, Ross! What to say? Well, it left me breatheless there's a start. It's so true, and the truth hurts but it is true. I love this! If someone didn't ...